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BryanThePaladin [Ronark Land Base] unedited/unfinished

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    Default BryanThePaladin [Ronark Land Base] unedited/unfinished

    removed. close.
    Last edited by itzbryan; 10-19-2009 at 11:59 AM.

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    1sttttttttt and decent video 8/10

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    hm pretty good, 8/10

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    if only rly wasnt so flooded with koxp

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    not bad 6/10

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    I know it says "unfinished" but i'm gonna rate it as finished so you can go from there:

    Intro: not so good. Using the music to edit around is good, but then you should use more footage.
    Music: What's up with the music? Sure the "im not alone" mayb sounds abit cool, but the rest really sucked. I just woke up and fell right back to sleep. Unique non-used music is also something i like, but it has to have some variation... Don't chose music that are ment to be played on hour long rave partys...
    PK: The pk is nice.. you are a tank even tho you are paper. But imo rlb gets abit boring. Try to have more variation, if possible
    Other bad stuff: What's up with the voices? They arn't clear enough to understand, and imo they are annoying
    Outro: Just black? i guess you will add more footage there later

    So there is room for improvement

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    omg this music beats me :O :O
    6/10 cause of the music, and the "ending" and the annoying intro(i can read, its unfinished, but then why did you take this here?)

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    liked it gj! u tank pretty nice as a paper

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    Quote Originally Posted by Salmin View Post
    I know it says "unfinished" but i'm gonna rate it as
    Outro: Just black? i guess you will add more footage there later

    So there is room for improvement

    No, nothing will be added, that's why it is posted. If I was going to add or change anything I wouldn't have released it....

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