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Last edited by itzbryan; 10-19-2009 at 11:59 AM.
hm pretty good, 8/10
if only rly wasnt so flooded with koxp
not bad 6/10
I know it says "unfinished" but i'm gonna rate it as finished so you can go from there:
Intro: not so good. Using the music to edit around is good, but then you should use more footage.
Music: What's up with the music? Sure the "im not alone" mayb sounds abit cool, but the rest really sucked. I just woke up and fell right back to sleep. Unique non-used music is also something i like, but it has to have some variation... Don't chose music that are ment to be played on hour long rave partys...
PK: The pk is nice.. you are a tank even tho you are paper. But imo rlb gets abit boring. Try to have more variation, if possible
Other bad stuff: What's up with the voices? They arn't clear enough to understand, and imo they are annoying
Outro: Just black? i guess you will add more footage there later
So there is room for improvement
omg this music beats me :O :O
6/10 cause of the music, and the "ending" and the annoying intro(i can read, its unfinished, but then why did you take this here?)
liked it gj! u tank pretty nice as a paper