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Sexy Mage
Nice draw.
6.5/10 .
shapes are way too round-ish imo
I liked the handwriting, the face could use a bit more work tho as it kinda lacks detail
also, the legs make it seem as if we were watching the character from a slightly higher place, but that doesn't show in the main body / face.
with that in consideration, the legs seem abnormally small.
and the staff is being held a little pointing to the body, when it should point to the ground.
props if you made it without looking at an actual SS, though.
about the round-ish previous comment... I think I'll take it back, because it's up to each person and their drawing style (the round-ish makes it look a little cartoonish, which is fine but i prefer realism )
To be honest i used a SS , but wasnt concentrated fully on it, only about some details like gryphons and staff details. After i've done it , i noticed that mistake ( legs ) which should be extended to the end of the paper but since i was so sleepy i couldnt pay attention about that.
Ofc it looks cartoonish since i havent some extra experience with drawing ( only natural exp. ) , it would be perfectly if i have finished art school.
ill do it how it should be, just lemme get some free time (:
what would you like to be compared to?
my opinion its a good 7/10
you got the right idea just need to clean it up
need straighter lines
Gotta love how everyone here has become an art critique.
Seriously, are you just trying to get more posts or are you experts on the subject? To me, this seems like a great painting, 10/10 no doubt as I would never be able to do something like that.
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