Rate My Intros

[Gonno]

Hello
I wanna start my pk video vol 2 but first i wanna get gg intro
I made already 2 intro
Watch them in HD and rate ty
first one:
[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LI6peCdMyqg]YouTube - ‪theCha0sIntro.wmv‬‏[/ame]
second one:
[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezTMQxZMcEo&feature=related]YouTube - ‪theCha0s Intro‬‏[/ame]

All are welcome to flame just say what u think!

[Mudito]

I liked the 1st one :P

[Detoox]

9/10 very good intro

[Bison]

the first one its kinda awesome !!! really nice job ;o !!

[regiss]

first one is really GG

[Thardy]

imo the second one is insane o.o
but both are really good mate

[MushtMan]

I'm gonna give you my honest criticism:

First one:

The beginning was good but afterwards when you see 2 screens it actually gets boring because you expect something to happen, all that build up or w.e and then nothing really happens? its not exciting watching those 2 small screens, if you somehow merged it let's say into 1 big scene with you coming right up close into the camera and at the *BOOM* of the music you are up close and then you black out, and start the pk.

Second one:

Again right at the start it's fine with oggy but when you get to thechaos and it's just tilting from side to side, it's quite annoying to see that and frankly it's not "cool".

Now when you get to the PRESENTS part and you're at the height of the music (right at about 0:23 or 0:24) that is where if you want you should put that comets seen and all that (meaning put the video like a bit back so it fits with the music.

Anyways overall I can see you are good at editing vids and all that, and the vids themselves were good but not perfect. And like I said there's something about the ending of the vids that aren't quite right (when i say ending i'm referring to the last few seconds), like on the second one when you put the writing you can't really read what's written cus it's too bright and gets hidden.

[Gonno]

All Thanks
And most of wanna thanks MushtMan to said what would change to make it better ( will try :P )

[elkar]

Text's purpose is to be readable.

Rating: N/A

[HighRoller]

Alrite first one is better to half time, after that it start to sucking up and comes bland boring.
2nd one is average good from start to the end, so I would choose it to the movie.

[iNuke]

Text Choice 1/10 everything else is nice done.

I like the second intro more, overall 8/10

[FuriousKo]

5/10 got boring at the end.

[FinlandBoy]

1st one was better.

[ShallWeHaveAFootRace?]

The text was terrible, but everything else was great.

[evilstevil]

1st was the best and i had hard time reading the text but dayum sick edit !

for the 2nd i reallly like that " presents " part

love it !