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    well , my english is not so good and i need to make a composition (my teacher allowed me to make my exam at home :P) its english exam
    and i need some help from u guys :P
    well this is how the exam look like



    Guy Volunteered to go on trip with a class of elementary school students , guy wrote a letter to his freind ben telling him about the trip

    write guy's letter.(about 35-40 words )

    here are some things you can write about:
    -where you went
    -what you did together
    -the food
    -how the children behaved
    -what you like best about the day


    Dear Ben ,

    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________
    Write Beck soon ,
    Guy


    its not a joke,
    i really need your help guys since my english is not so well ,
    thx

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    Wow. i can write 1.

    what grade you in?

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    im grade 10 :|
    i just need to work more on my grammer and vocabulary
    im not going to school alot
    i learned my english from ko , =]


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    Dear Ben,


    I recently went on a field trip with a local group of elementary students to a cafe called Drummonds. It was a spectacular place. Just the view to the river was nice enough, even the inside was in superb condition. The food was even better then the view! The cafe had a variety of foods such as: breakfast, lunch, dinner, and even deserts. The kids could only pick from the lunch menu and one choice of desert. I on the other hand could pick anything from each of the menu's and could also have unlimited deserts. I chose a cheese burger and as desert i chose a piece of pie. I am so pleased on this cafe's performance that I will come back often.



    Write Beck soon ,
    Guy


    now..this probably isnt 100 grammer correct.
    good luck

    uh oh.. this is around 120 words

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    Thats quite americanized depends on your tutor, whether or not they can tell its been written by someone

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    Thats quite americanized depends on your tutor, whether or not they can tell its been written by someone[/b]
    all he has to do is change some big words get like synonyms for them or something i guess and put some grammer errors in there and maybe take out the comas and uncapitilize the I's and also misspell some words

    we cant write it perfect for him. he has to do some work to and edit it as much as he needs to for his teacher to belive it was him that wrote this.

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    "Do your exams at home"

    rofl@teacher.

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