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U guys should be thinkful about this

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    Hellhawkx
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    Default U guys should be thinkful about this

    His dad was a drunk
    His mom was an addict
    His parents kept him
    Locked in an attic


    His only friend
    was a little toy bear
    It was old and worn out
    And had patches of hair


    He always talked to it
    When no one's around
    He lays there and hugs it
    Not a peep of sound


    Until his parents
    unlock the door
    Some more and more pain
    He'll have to endure


    A bruise on his leg
    A scar on his face
    Why would he be
    In such a horrible place?


    But he grabs his bear
    And softly crys
    He loves his parents
    But they want him to die


    He sits in the corner
    Quiet but thinking,
    "Please God, why is
    My life always sinking? "


    Such a bad life
    For a sad little kid
    He'd get beaten and beaten
    For anything he did


    Then one night
    His mom came home high
    And the poor child was beaten
    As hours went by


    Then his mom suddenly
    Grabbed for a blade
    It was sharp and pointy
    One that she made


    She thrusted the blade
    Right in his chest,
    "You deserve to die
    You worthless pest!"


    The mom walked out
    Leaving the boy slowly dieing
    He grabbed his bear
    And again started crying


    Police showed up
    At the small little house
    Then quickly barged in
    Everything quiet as a mouse


    One officer slowly
    Opened a door
    To find the little boy
    Lieing on the floor


    It must have been bad
    To go through so much harm
    But at least he died
    With his best friend in his arms




    A child dies every day from child abuse. And if you have an ounce of pity in you for little Auroura and you hate child abuse with a passion you will repost this(aww i think im gonna cry) and help out those abused children and let them know that someone cared for them

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    ChrisOwns
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    I'm soooooo fucking thinkful right now.

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    AndTheHeroFails
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    yes i know.

    There was a book about a real man who was treated this way. i forgot name.

    name was dave. 3 books 1 series.

    aww.

    :wub:

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    A child called "it" lol, anyways, that poem was poorly written.

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    Originally posted by evenson
    A child called "it" lol, anyways, that poem was poorly written.

    That child was treated very well.....what are you talking about?

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    i get chain e-mail letters of this stuff all the time, and than at the end of it it says if u dont send it on blah blah the kid will come back to life and kill u

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    there's a true stpry about a guy being locked up in the attic like that here in sweden. His parents did it just cuz he was handicapped. He died at the age of 12 I think not to far away from where I live.

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    Guys and gals don't do like me,
    if in real life you can too much to see.
    1st is a shock and 100 u can bare,
    don't get used to it and stop care.

    Poems do suck because they are blind,
    they don't force u to smell a rotten child.
    They only discripe the atmosphere,
    be glad u can read it and be safely here.

    Poems tell feelings in nicely way
    in reality there is higher price to pay.
    No need to discripe Teddy bear in bed,
    bruised child is always mentally dead.

    No need to speak poetric tone,
    too many people don't have feelings their own.
    Abused children often continue the chain,
    never there will be end of pain.

    All that is so easy to read,
    when u cannot smell the rotten meat.
    Shapeless faces, too much blood
    on that little body, tell me God

    Since when I lost my feelings for all this shit
    was it number 51, when I didn't care a bit.
    Worst is that I don't remember anymore,
    whose dad was drunk and whose mom a whore.




    When this happens to me, I quit my job...think about it h43r:

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    Originally posted by wagyar
    Guys and gals don't do like me,
    if in real life you can too much to see.
    1st is a shock and 100 u can bare,
    don't get used to it and stop care.

    Poems do suck because they are blind,
    they don't force u to smell a rotten child.
    They only discripe the atmosphere,
    be glad u can read it and be safely here.

    Poems tell feelings in nicely way
    in reality there is higher price to pay.
    No need to discripe Teddy bear in bed,
    bruised child is always mentally dead.

    No need to speak poetric tone,
    too many people don't have feelings their own.
    Abused children often continue the chain,
    never there will be end of pain.

    All that is so easy to read,
    when u cannot smell the rotten meat.
    Shapeless faces, too much blood
    on that little body, tell me God

    Since when I lost my feelings for all this shit
    was it number 51, when I didn't care a bit.
    Worst is that I don't remember anymore,
    whose dad was drunk and whose mom a whore.




    When this happens to me, I quit my job...think about it * * *h43r:
    what the,...... :blink:

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    sorry if it shocked :unsure: That's what I see in my work sometimes, so to those who thinks first poet was funny, I don't think mine was...

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