BORED AT WORK LOL

[Conin]

So I'm bored at work with no work to do (yay)

So I made this in teh photoshopz:



Please tell me what you think

[Beast&Harlot]

I like it

[tompsu]

Really nice

[Conin]

Thank you

I took what advice was posted on my earlier thread from about 2 weeks ago and tried to put it to practice.

If anyone else posts can you please give proper comments, you know say what you like, what you don't like etc. :lol:

[spab]

blending: right hand is ok the rest is not blended at all
render: quiet overused, but good dynamics in it
composition: the top of head is cut away but you choosed the basic one, nothing wonderfull, but youve messed it up with pasting the face on left side of sig
colors: i think that there is the biggest problem, its quiet monocolor and PC red is really hard color, and you have it wrong the red on render is too burnt and the red on bg is too plain and bright
Flow: the render is a big potencial for flow, but you havent used it at all, you tried, but you have made it on bg and it should be on the render
efectsnly the bg, there are few effects but definitelly you need to work on this, cuz it also cause that the signature is quiet empty
Depth:it should be foreground render background but you have only render and bg, which here is not enough
Typo:big, away from focal, wrong font, without effects, i think the worst part of it
atmosphere:hardly any
light: totally messed up, it goes on the render from right side, but you made it from down, so it does not fir it, also it looks that the explosion or something whats on bg is behind the render not on /i think that that somethingman was supposed to be in the middle of that explosion
BG:without effects, messed by second render
after all 2.5/10