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[ResserGD]

Made on FL7 (Fruity Loops 7). Took about 5 hours.

Here is the link;

http://rapidshare.com/files/260228345/ST.mp3.html

http://rapidshare.com/files/260228978/ST.mp3.html

http://rapidshare.com/files/260229398/ST.mp3.html

EDIT: http://www.speedyshare.com/693158878.html

Since stupid Rapidshare will only allow 10 people to download it, i uploaded it 3 times - each of the links contain the same file.

Be honest, all feedback is welcome, but constructive criticism please =]

Thanks.

Also, if anyone has used this program alot/is an expert on it, any tips would be appreciated; can post here or get in touch via PM.

[Salmin]

upload to:
www.speedyshare.com

Im downloading and will add an edit when i'm done :P

[Zingery]

I generally dislike FL butits good as a start.
as for the track, I like the simplicity in it but somethings could make it better. I miss a fatter bassline if u know what I mean. the drumline is steady and simple, I like it. maybe have more chords to base the melody on, it get a little too repetitive for me.

its a good beat, put in a fatter bassline and maybe have something in the low background covering the empty spots.

Yours Sincerely

Zingery

[darter]

srry mate but the overall beat is bad :/

[Zingery]

srry mate but the overall beat is bad :/[/b]

well thats constructive criticism isnt it?
maybe next time try to focus on things he can do better istead of flaming him?

[Di_Strider2952]

for some reason this reminds me of some old music u would hear in a nintendo game

[darter]

well thats constructive criticism isnt it?
maybe next time try to focus on things he can do better istead of flaming him?[/b]

how was I flaming him? I said srry so stfu. If there was constructive crticism to give I would but this beat is a lost cause /failure.

now that's flaming.

[ResserGD]

how was I flaming him? I said srry so stfu. If there was constructive crticism to give I would but this beat is a lost cause /failure.

now that's flaming.[/b]

Whether you like or dislike the beat is a personal preference. Whats the point in saying you don't like it when your not even saying why?

I generally dislike FL butits good as a start.
as for the track, I like the simplicity in it but somethings could make it better. I miss a fatter bassline if u know what I mean. the drumline is steady and simple, I like it. maybe have more chords to base the melody on, it get a little too repetitive for me.

its a good beat, put in a fatter bassline and maybe have something in the low background covering the empty spots.

Yours Sincerely

Zingery[/b]

Thanks.

for some reason this reminds me of some old music u would hear in a nintendo game[/b]

I think its because i'm not used to the program yet. I agree it doesn't sound very proffesional, which is why i came on here to ask for opinions. I don't know what it is but it just sounds off. Maybe once i understand the program better i can change that.

[Zingery]

u can start to use some good vst's, that way, u wont get the analog sound on it.
if u are into hip hop and r&b, maybe use more strings and bass with the drums.
are u into more trance and techno, start with a bassline on the metronome and work ur way from there.

hope this helps, and remember. there is no exact rules on making music, u listen to it and u'll know when it feels right.

Just Pm me with any questions regarding feedback on ur projects or questions about music in general.

From a fellow musician
Zingery

[ResserGD]

u can start to use some good vst's, that way, u wont get the analog sound on it.
if u are into hip hop and r&b, maybe use more strings and bass with the drums.
are u into more trance and techno, start with a bassline on the metronome and work ur way from there.

hope this helps, and remember. there is no exact rules on making music, u listen to it and u'll know when it feels right.

Just Pm me with any questions regarding feedback on ur projects or questions about music in general.

From a fellow musician
Zingery[/b]

TBH im into most types of music, but primarily Hip Hop/R&B/dance. I'm still trying to find the right instruments to use - there are quite a few its difficult to pick the right one, and each one seems to fit differently to different tunes.

I'm finding it hard to figure out where to start when i make a new beat tho. At the moment what im doing is thinking up a tune, putting it into FL and then working on a beat + finding an instrument for it from there. Its difficult really.

Also, VST?

[Zingery]

yea, I understand what u mean. I havent made much hip hop music, but usually its just like u explained. u find a melody, and then make a drumtrack and bassline on top of it. after that u can add chords that match the chord progression of the melody.

about vst or vsti, basicly its a virtual instrument being played by a midi keyboard or a DAW(digital audio workstation) i.e FL,cubase,sonar etc. its a high quality intrument witch sounds 10x better than the sounds u can make in the DAW's.
there are many types of vst's, drums,guitars,strings,pianos etc. some are free and some aren't.

Zingery