new siggy

[niightmayor]

lookin for some criticism ^_^





lay it on me

[Canz]

Just started using pen tool? Those lines need some work lol.

[niightmayor]

yeah i was a little baked last night lol i didnt even realize how bad they were until today

[Lord0fWar]

It be a bit plain and the pen tooling needs a little work but other than that its a decent sig = )

[M3rgim]

its cool except the pen tool thing

[niightmayor]

thanks lord, last time i just got an 'eww' from you haha
i was waiting to see what you said



when i get home, im going for round two

[niightmayor]

new one that i messed with a little

[assasin375]

gg
now joey says to work on his xD

[Canz]

New edition lacks deph, is too big, I like where you placed the text but I just don't like the text. That c4d is kinda weird right there needs some work aswell.

Nah, peen tooling is still bad.

Just look at 'em, no offense really, but they could of be done by a steady-handed person with paint!
They don't match the colors they are just plain white :blink:

http://liamers.deviantart.com/art/Sun-glas...ge-sig-78923248

Try to make them match! Thats the way to go. BTW, I did not make that sig, regards to liamers from deviantart.

[niightmayor]

New edition lacks deph, is too big, I like where you placed the text but I just don't like the text. That c4d is kinda weird right there needs some work aswell.

Nah, peen tooling is still bad.

Just look at 'em, no offense really, but they could of be done by a steady-handed person with paint!
They don't match the colors they are just plain white :blink:

http://liamers.deviantart.com/art/Sun-glas...ge-sig-78923248

Try to make them match! Thats the way to go. BTW, I did not make that sig, regards to liamers from deviantart.[/b]

thanks
these were my first two non-ko renders so i still got a lot of work to do


all the advice you can give is welcome

[niightmayor]

did a little more editting

[darter]

it looks even worse compared to the smaller sized one...seriously size is way to big, the average sig size is 400x150 and as previously stated the c4d looks ugly.

[niightmayor]

such harsh criticism from someone with such a good signature h34r:

[Canz]

Just try again with another sig from scratch. Choice of C4D was bad, lightning is bad and the deph is bad aswell, so is the flow.
You did improve thou with the lines, but still...

Regards

[niightmayor]

Just try again with another sig from scratch. Choice of C4D was bad, lightning is bad and the deph is bad aswell, so is the flow.
You did improve thou with the lines, but still...

Regards[/b]

will do

im just trying to get a little better, gotta start somewhere